| Reviewed by | Review | Chap. | Date |
| syndelar | How i love your chliches...this one was perfect, funny, sexy, adorable, everythinf. you really know how to turn the things around so that they are not the same old thing. Love it... | 1 | 2010-07-12 03:23:43 |
| some chic from ff.net | you should be given an award for writing the funnest and sexiest story in only three chapters. | 2010-06-24 21:46:51 | |
| ageha | hi. i finish reading your really good fanfiction. i want to practice my english, so people say i should read, and i love yaoi (I am Japanese, and bishounen very popular too ^-^) so i choose to read a lot of fanfiction. your story is really funny and good. boys very hot  i hope you write more stories not finish yet too.  -ageha |
3 | 2009-12-30 17:11:18 |
| Sheherezade | Glad midsommar själv! Kul att se att det finns fler svenska som känner till Gundam Wing och gillar yaoi |
2 | 2009-07-05 08:17:17 |
| Sheherezade | Glad midsommar själv! Kul att se att det finns fler svenska som känner till Gundam Wing och gillar yaoi |
2 | 2009-07-05 08:16:08 |
| darkrevenge | Hahaha! "I'm not dead, of course I've thought about it.” Haha that's something I'd say. The blue conditioner bottle was friggin brilliant! It's not abrupt.. I think it's more to real life. When people actually start communicating wonderful things happen. Anyone that disagrees would with me would have to consider the best hint of how Wufei feels prior to this chapter.. is he actually agreed. He didn't half to. He actually did. ~dark |
3 | 2009-06-28 10:33:31 |
| Minxie | SQUEEE! You are adorable. the conditioner bottle was A-mazing and you almost had me blowing a gasket with the false ending. well played my friend well played. OK so I will tell you the fake sex story. God I can't remember exactly when it was but like 6 months ago Ratatat played in Atlanta and my friend Emris is OBSSESSED with them So we decided it was a good idea to drive 5 hours to see them. There were maybe six or seven of us in jays van which can sleep six if you really try. but we had to get a motel for the night to have a good place to park it. Anyway that's the setting, Atlanta concert friends. After the concert we hit a couple places and after a bit we realized that this guy that chatted up Donte for at the concert was following us. So M.K. being the largest and most level headed of us at the time confronts him he says he just wants to talk to our friend alone which was not happening. MK says no sorry he's straight (which isn't always strictly true but this guy was grade A creeper). So donte grabs my arm and I play fake!girlfriend for a bit which is fine I've done it before. Then when we get to the motel later the guy is there! we walk up to our room MK and emris are already asleep inside. We're just like "oh hey creepy guy this is our room" and he tells us he'll be next door. So we run in and lock the door spazzing out call everyone else and tell them to sleep in the van because we aren't opening the door til morning. then we sit there for awhile to nervous and hopped up on adrenaline to sleep then donte has theis brilliant idea. Well skip to the next morning MK and Emris think we actually slept together (well we did but no sex) and when we walk outside we figure out the guy had lied and the nice little old lady that i had met at breakfast the day before and her husband were in the room next to us. And she saw me leaving that room with three guys... donte's fake sex is really loud and creative and really could be mistaken for four people. I thought I would die. Ha but there's the story you asked for it! thanks again for the wonderful fic! -M |
2009-06-27 20:25:11 | |
| darkpanther | LOL! that was hilarious after all the angst and drama. Good lemon too! I absolutely did love the way they got together!  |
3 | 2009-06-27 02:08:37 |
| Chereche | SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Forget the hammer!!! I loved it, loved it, loved it! Omg...that conditioner bottle was ingenius! Those last few lines had me rolling on the floor  Man...i love this fic! Wufei had just the right amount of sass throughout the lemon...I dont need to bop Duo, Wufei's got that under control  Hmm that wedding scene was so gr8, i almost cried along wid Duo...and then that lemon...GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No wonder the guests left the hotel lol...and poor Quatre and yeah 4 Meg  snickerI'm glad you didnt have Fei falling over expressing his undying love for Duo...he cares...thats enough...they can build up from there...I also predict that those two are going to have to move to an isolated village bcuz wid that noise Duo makes, they're sure to break the noise pollution laws...and I dont think Wufei will be reserved for much longer... and did I mention that hair conditioner was ingenious Bye! Great story, I loved it loved it loved itttt! |
3 | 2009-06-26 17:20:30 |
| Anonymous | lol. hilarious! love it! |
3 | 2009-06-26 15:12:51 |
| Minxie | Ahhh, oh my god, laughing so hard. Ha there I have composed myself . That was great! Loved the Candy!Apology and Jealous!Duo and that bedroom scene was spec-freaking-tacular I laughed so hard. I could completely visualize Wufei's reaction because I have been in a similar situation (it's exremely freaking embarassing ). Great chappie, love!-M |
2009-06-21 20:55:19 | |
| elial | can..not..breath.....laughing too hard...... duo sure works hard as a bottom |
2 | 2009-06-20 00:35:53 |
| Anonymous | LMAO!! oh that "bed" scene was hilarious!!! i can just imagine wufei's face.....! ahh duo, i just love your character. |
2 | 2009-06-19 21:32:02 |
| MultifacetedTune | Goodness, but I love Duo! How naughty!!! Oh, and I love how you portrayed the relationship between Wufei and Sally. Very cute. Now if only I could find a friend as rich at Quatre....... le sigh |
2 | 2009-06-19 20:43:24 |
| Zealous68 | That was brilliant. I have enjoyed this story thoroughly. I found the scene in Duo's apartment uncanny though. I had the same experience when I was helping move my (now) roommate to my apartment. The descriptions were so close. If you only stated the milk in the refrigerator as chocolate and added a bag of chips to the list I would have thought you somehow had that apartment bugged-video included. Thankfully he and I aren't faking a marriage. I honestly had idea that this story would be done so well. I think you have kept the characters in their respective roles well. The flow is believable and dialog seems very real. Good job. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I absolutely love 5x2 or 2x5. |
2 | 2009-06-19 18:32:29 |
| Chereche | so many different emotions in this chappie...I loved it!!! duo has a bit, hell a big amount of jealousy...hmm, he needs to watch out for that... Aww...Wufei the knight in shining armour...that was a great way to get back to Duo's ex for hurtin him Quatre and his eternal kind heart givin Duo his perfect wedding...and huggies for him for choosing my home region for the wedding!!! but I'll only scold fei a lil lol because that was so cute of him to accept the sweet apology. But, he could have at least aided Duo a lil in scandalising the whole floor lol. And I'm sure his cheeks will be a lil wee bit red when he next sees Quatre...and I hope that after the honeymoon he teaches Duo some proper housecleaning skills and gets him into a better career field!!!Hmm...its a good thing I have a sledge hammer around...that's work wonders on that hardhat Cant wait for more!!!! |
2 | 2009-06-19 17:42:43 |
| Dark Amphibian | Bwahahahahaha! I could totally see Quatre just running both of them over - and I loved that when Duo handed the phone to Wufei, he was JUST as unsuccessful in stopping the Q! At the end, oh, I'm guessing one or (more likely) both of our boys is hard and hoping desperately that it's not noticed. And depending on how sensitive Q's empathy is, he may be laughing his ass off, knowing they're both crazy for each other but clueless. Thoroughly enjoyed this! I love the way you're working this particular cliche. |
2009-06-19 17:10:07 | |
| darkpanther | MY oh MY! That was just hilarious. I cannot wait for your next chapter and Wufei finally getting to realize that there is more to Duo. Update soon! |
2 | 2009-06-19 14:16:12 |
| darkrevenge | Hahaha. Duo is awesome. And Wufei's reaction is excellent. Though, I wish Wufei would cave... this is comedy. They are going to be married.... And if they are caught with someone else.. it wouldn't look so well to others that they are lying to. So... why not? I can see Duo arguing this point. ~dark |
2 | 2009-06-19 09:33:06 |
| MultifacetedTune | Very interesting idea. I love the clever spin you've put on such a cliche plot line, as well as your characterizations, Duo's especially. Hopefully we will be getting a higher rating than 'G' in the second and third parts... hint, hint Looking forward to the next chapter -- keep up the good work! |
1 | 2009-06-17 22:38:53 |