| Reviewed by | Review | Chap. | Date |
| RhylinSweet | 'No, I really don't. I would rather finish my mystery novel and drink a cup of tea,' I died. All over my keyboard. You seriously captured the "I don't wanna do a threesome but I love my fucking girlfriend" mentality. And Wufei is the BEST. THE. BEST. Sex Coach this side of the universe. I reveled in the eventual build up and Duo finally turning into the flaming death god we all know and love~ During their second time, all the talking? Genius. Their kinks and teasing just blew me away. This is definitly going into my personal archives! |
1 | 2010-07-04 08:07:29 |
| Kopper Kanashii |   Uh huh, yeeeaaahh, that's the way to do it, uh huh, yeeaaah. (Yes, I am actually singing)I was so worried that Bitch-Hilde would be sticking around, but of course I should have known better.  And how exactly was this a PWP? There was at least an insy-teensy bit in there! |
2 | 2010-01-06 16:23:40 |
| Minxie | I realllllly reallllly want to know why I didn't read this before...wow. My dear you are once again splendiferous! -M |
2009-06-21 22:02:18 | |
| Kata | Ohh my god!!! That is without a doubt the best story you have ever written! Can I just say SEQUEL! I love this story and just wish it was a lot longer... I absolutely love how you portrait Wufei and Duo is just adorable... Not to mention steaming hot gay sex... Jummy!  Keep up the good work and please have pity on my poor starving soul and come up with a sequel... Kata |
1 | 2009-06-06 19:49:43 |
| spider-jen | YEAH! Wufei and Duo back together, it was too depressing when Duo was left with Hilde-yeck! This was so very very HOT! |
2 | 2009-06-06 08:34:47 |
| darkrevenge | wow. the most detailed smut I've ever read. very realistic. I like that better than just a couple (or three) horny people going at it like they are sex gods or something. However.. no guy draw attention to a lost or failure of an erection. Yes, it is understandable in the situation, but don't think he'd draw attention to it. I think Hilde's a bitch. Duo agrees so maybe he should dump her. Hehe. Of course love is a bitch... can't help who ya fall for..... really. ~dark |
2009-05-28 04:18:40 | |
| Anonymous | i love your stories, but for god sake update, i'm dying here | 1 | 2009-05-25 16:29:43 |
| Shini | O.o,never read any 3some so detailed like this and ugh,i think it is not healthy the way duo pushs him self. | 1 | 2009-05-24 13:24:33 |
| JAC | I love! This has a more realistic sense to it than some of the other fics I've read. (And I've read alot ^_-) Sometimes it's nice to know that the characters can't just slam it in for the first time and be all hot and horny afterwards. lol. I'm actually wanting too see if you have anything else for this story. I personally think Duo should dump Hilde's ass for Wufei's, but I'm baised for my man smut. PS. I do enjoy your other work as well. ^_^ You've become one of my author's that I try to check up on every few weeks. |
2009-01-30 14:22:13 | |
| Shallikas | Holycrapholycrapholycrap!!!!!!!!! YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMERS! That was fantastic! I'm super in love with your Wufei. Seriously, great writing. Please more!! |
1 | 2009-01-22 19:12:47 |
| Aegis | That is seriously the best bit of smut I have read in a long time. I don't usually go for AU but this has such a ring of realism that I found myself reading lines out loud just to try to disprove how effectively they worked. It all works, so I failed but I may have traumatized my roommate in the process. Its a win-win situation. And I applaud your use of 5x2. There is not enough fanfics out there with that combination. The only thing to make this better would be some 6x5x2 on the side. Thanks for the most enjoyable read. |
1 | 2009-01-15 22:48:39 |
| Anonymous | if you stop writing this story i think you will have a riot on your hands so PLEASE dont stop with only this one little chapter. | 2009-01-15 22:23:38 | |
| S.Maldiva | Oh, this was good. Wufei actually came off looking the best out of the whole thing (literally and figuratively ) B - hot damn , the way you described him - he sounded yum yum yummy)Poor Duo needs some self esteem lessons and someone to help though his abandonment issues - Hilde, ok she's a slut, I except but I hate that she's such a bitch for pushing her boyfriend into this. (Screams for a sequel. This Wufei is smoking hot and I want to see MORE of him. And maybe let Duo build up confidence) |
1 | 2009-01-15 21:21:24 |
| Anonymous | I like the weird realism in this! I beg you, though, get a beta reader. The typos and errors are totally distracting. |
1 | 2009-01-15 18:12:48 |
| Shinigamiinochi | I remember reading a fic like this a very long time ago, only it had Heero instead of Wufei. I liked it then and I liked it now. I definitely feel sorry for Duo, having to live with someone like Hilde. She acted like a total bitch to him and it seemed like Wufei was the one who cared about Duo more. The sex scene was actually very realistic while staying erotic. Good work! | 1 | 2009-01-15 08:42:19 |
| Kata | Must say I loved every bit of it! I sure hope it´s not a one shot... (is it or is it not a one-shot???) Love this Wufei, gorgeous and sure of himself. Keep up the good work and can´t wait for your next update...  |
2009-01-15 07:14:40 | |
| Anonymous | Not quite as sexy as your usual fair, but a lot more detailed and believable. I think everyone has run into some type of the 'Wufei' character in this story at some point, and felt like Duo does. And some poor people have a Hilde for a girlfriend. Just goes to show that being madly in love and actually liking everything s/he comes up with aren't necessarily inclusive. Minor nitpicks is that there's a 'possession' that should be 'position', and the part where Duo wants to continue because he's curious about sex with a man comes a little bit out of the blue. Not a very big problem, but if you could work something in a little bit before that part, it might work better. |
1 | 2009-01-15 07:06:06 |