| Reviewed by | Review | Chap. | Date |
| madampeach | Oh Yum  leers that was awsome x many!! yes, on to the "punishments", I say XD fufufu <3 Duo needs to make up for all the damage he's causes >DI cant wait to see what the next cliche with be ^.^ |
2 | 2009-01-02 13:02:53 |
| Anonymous | It was cute! | 1 | 2008-12-30 11:23:44 |
| Ah Hael |  ...... give me a moment.... That was just... wow... I have no idea what to say to that. I have to say that was probably one of the best master/slave fan-fiction I've read. The characterization was just so them. Duo would hate being a slave unless it was entirely on his terms. And Wufei trying to keep his life and his temper under tight control. I kinda feel sad for anyone else who has a slave fic out there because you just raised the bar far too high.  |
2 | 2008-12-28 11:38:43 |
| Sheherezade | Your concept is funny, with the clichés I mean. You pull it off well. It will be interesting to see what you come up with next. | 2 | 2008-12-27 13:28:53 |
| Nibiki | laughs I loved it! And I would love to see this one-shot become a multi-chapter story. Keep up the great writing and I'm sorry for not having the time to review for your Wallflower series. Can't wait for more updates. Until then, Ja! |
1 | 2008-12-12 18:41:53 |
| juneQ | I should not be reading this because I have a final tomorrow at 9 and I still need to read 100 pages before the night's over (-looks to the heaven- I'm doomed). But, haha, this first chapter is pure lol. I was a bit wary at first when you said it was all the old cliches, but you know, the way you went about writing this, it wasn't really cliche at all (I haven't read another fic where a friend auctions off his bike and apartment yet, I think my heart stopped for a bit when Duo opened his mouth and said two-bedroom apartment, no joke). Overall, I loved this. Keep writing more! |
1 | 2008-12-11 18:56:27 |
| madampeach | HAHAH OMG I think I'm probably laughing louder that hyena!Duo right now XD!!! I love it I love it!!! :wipes tear of joy: oooh this is the best thing I've read since .. since I dont even know when but it made me literaly LOL Well done! and thank you for the hilarity :') | 1 | 2008-12-01 23:18:10 |
| Shinigamiinochi | Ok, I have to admit that 5x2 is not my favorite pairing, but I absolutely loved that. It was sooo cute! | 1 | 2008-11-28 20:47:28 |