Fanfiction

Reviewed by	Review	Chap.	Date
Sheherezade	Very nicely written. Especially the end. "Based on a true story", which story is that?		2009-06-02 15:09:19
Devious lil Devil	Awwwww. I was so excited to see this update. I like that Duo got to face his past so that he would have that extra incentive to never to those things again. Really really sweet read this fic. Looking foward to your next! Keep the 2x5x2 fandom alive! ~Devious	5	2009-06-02 04:43:38
darkrevenge	That was absolutely amazing. I've never said that about a fan fiction before. I could feel the hidden pain Wufei had. It had a very nice solid ending. I'm kinda sad it's over.. because there is no more, but the same time glad because it was amazing. I envy you. I really do. ~dark	5	2009-06-01 12:27:11
darkpanther	This is a lovely story! I cannot believe I had not read this before... and I was Wufei deprived, searching for lovely Wufei stories. Thank you so much for this, it was great!	5	2009-05-30 14:39:10
Minxie	stunned there is another bit to tea ten minutes later... can't function, grinning too hard Haha thank you for another wonderful tidbit my dear!		2009-05-30 13:27:10
señorita_luna	weeee very beautiful fic!!! congrats!!! wish to read more from you!!	5	2009-05-30 12:15:38
Dragon Lover	I absolutely LOVED this story! Great work!	5	2009-05-30 11:35:38
Minxie	holy bejesus... I read this to tide me over for the next chapter of wallflower but it turned out just as amazing! I honestly think you are the best 2x5 writer ever	4	2009-03-10 21:44:00
Anonymous	that part where he asked wufei if he was the only one who had that kind of tea. -sniffle-	4	2008-11-10 07:48:18
Anonymous	when you said you'd never write a sad ending... i felt that it'd be safe for me to leave my heart in your hands.	2	2008-11-10 07:35:54
Sheherezade	I think you did the sex-scene very well, kind of reminded me of my first time. The "this is not nice or even comfortable but I still really, really want to do it" kind of feeling that turns in to the "this is very nice" kind of feeling.	1	2008-09-06 11:39:36
Nibiki	Ok, I don't know why, but it keeps saying I'm reviewing for Chapter 1 when I'm actually trying to review the last chapter. Grrr. Anyhoo, I liked your other story so much, that I had to check out the rest of your collection. Mmm, love them! And yes, you definately have to write an epilogue. If you haven't already, I mean. So! On to the next fic. Ja!	1	2008-07-13 16:06:03
Pandora	I love how he describes all the teas. I have a question about how you pronouce the name Tara. I have a friend with that name who gets all miffed if you pronouce it wrong, and I think should would like this fanfic, but I have to know which Tara pronouciation you use before I tell her about it, because she will freak out (in a good way) if is the same as hers. So yeah....do you pronouce it Tar-a or Ter-ra? Not descriptive, I know, but I don't know how else to describe it. Anyway, great fanfic so far, can't wait until I finish it.	1	2008-07-08 20:56:39
luel exana	That was fantastic! You handled the concept very well, and even the parts that could have been overly sappy and dramatic were very tasteful and realistic. I like how you never overplayed Duo's questionable past, and Duo not feeling much for his parents (since he didn't remember them) was very sad and touching. I do have to say, I did see Wufei being the one who has Duo's favourite tea coming, but again you handled it well and it didn't detract from the story at all. And the sex hurting at first and Duo doubting why people did it, I could KISS you for writing it like that. My god, that was so refreshing to read. Not a trace of formulaic smut in it! I loved it. The only criticism I would have is the use of "Fei Fei", although it did turn out to be important to the relationship and the story itself (with Duo only calling him Wufei when he was mad, etc.). So after a while I didn't mind it anymore. Great job overall on this! I'd say you have nothing major to worry about, and I do think your author's notes are sweet. haha I worry to death about my own writing too, so I can empathize. : )	4	2008-06-25 00:04:28
dream	GAH! wipes eyes That was really good! I do hope you continue to write. I'm going to start reading Wallflower now because I loved how you wrote this story. As to how your lemon came out, it was wonderful. It was really realistic which is nice. I hope that you continue to write stories. Good luck with everything! ^_^	4	2008-05-10 18:32:33
sylenctone	Wow! This was fantastic. And your lemons are delicious, hot, and oh so vivid! Why, oh why did it take me this long to start going through all your fics? Your stories are a delight to me. Thank you very much for writing! I'm going to need to sneak in time to read all of your work now! Your delighted fangirl, jess	4	2008-05-09 10:00:22
Devious Lil Devil	wow, such a sweet ending. you kinda got me when wufei said 'the bush' i'm like 'australia?' lol. i just woke up like a half-hour ago and have yet to leave the bed. this totally made my morning and now i'm going to read '...wallflower' right now. keep up the great work feeding our 2x5x2 deprived souls.	4	2008-05-07 06:31:23
shogi	Hey! I had to looking for this!! It didn't come up on FF.net (or did it and I missed it?) so at first I didn't know it was done but then I was just browsing for something to read and came here and lo-and-behold! It was Fate. Eek! What an awesome ending to an awesome story! Actually, I can sort of see why it's not posted on ff.net... but I'll make sure to check around first when I'm looking for stories. I loved the fact that it was Duo on the bottom and how he and Wufei made up. It was wonderful! And the tea-twist was amazing... I absolutely adored the ending.	4	2008-05-05 19:10:32
Kamui-White	aww, i thoroughly enjoyed it, you have a talent, keep writing...an epilogue? ofcourse!^_^...again well done!	4	2008-05-05 01:55:56
Camena	Yay! I love good 2x5!!! Hey, do you have the name of that documentary by any chance?		2008-05-04 18:45:46