The siren call of the braid in the middle row by in2lalaland



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Reviewed by Review Chap. Date
syndelar I love this one...I have three pretty cats but I wish I had an ugly one after reading this one...I love your style and the dynamic between characters, you make them sound so real...tackle glomp 2010-07-12 02:40:58
darkrevenge OMG! You're stalking me. I had an ugly cat. It was a stupid tom cat that never fought back so it would get it's ears ripped to shreds, cuts and would limp everywhere it went. It showed up at my doorstep one day. I tried to get rid of it. It wouldn't leave so I just caved and let it in. It became my cat. He died maybe a few years ago of old age. He just took a nap and never woke up. I kinda miss that cat. My flatmate thought I was insane for keeping just a hideous and stupid cat. My guests would look at it like it was disgusting. He never had fleas and I'd nurse whatever damage was done to him while he was tom catting around. He just... looked really bad.

~dark
2 2009-05-25 06:52:58
darkrevenge I had to sneak a peak... I'm supposed to be doing something else far more pressing, but I couldn't resist. I love this chapter. It has me chuckling. I said Wufei and I are very alike... that's even truer now. The most amazing thing happened... he turned around. Haha! Yup... I've done that. Thought someone was absolutely amazing just because they -gasp- turned around or something equally simple.

I stake the claim that not matter who you are... if you met Duo you would develop a hair fetish. It's like magnetic or something. Very appropriate title.

Everyone picks middle row! Front is too close and you can't get away with anything. You have to pay attention. Back row you get called on more because everyone knows you are a slacker. Best to take the middle ground and blend. Go Wufei!

~dark
1 2009-05-25 06:41:01
Anonymous lol i would burn all my old pictures. yes it's all that mortifying... 10 2008-11-10 07:32:24
jade i could never flame u.. 8 2008-11-10 07:21:36
jade i wish my cat would use Me as a couch. :/ 6 2008-11-10 07:10:19
Nibiki Grr with the chapter 1 reviews when it's the last chapter review!!! >,<

Yeah this fic cracked me up! I absolutely LOVED IT!!!
1 2008-07-13 18:05:01
Anonymous Hey
First: beautiful chapters! Really I like your story very much and I will surely enjoy the sequel with all the family from Duo yay
Ehm I request you go see for your last chapters of this in fanfiction.net
There must have gone something seriously wrong, so...
Hope for more chapters soon
yas
2008-05-03 05:14:05
Devious Lil Devil squeals too cute! don't you just love grandparents? they always have the best (and the worst) pics of you as a child. snickers i would love to draw one of those pics for you but unfortunately that wasn't one of the skills god has gifted me with. nice to know that my review did it's job. i look forward to coughs smut coughs reading the next update.

~Devious
10 2008-05-02 20:17:20
Devious Lil Devil squeals too cute! don't you just love grandparents? they always have the best (and the worst) pics of you as a child. snickers i would love to draw one of those pics for you but unfortunately that wasn't one of the skills god has gifted me with. nice to know that my review did it's job. i look forward to coughs smut coughs reading the next update.

~Devious
10 2008-05-02 20:17:13
Anonymous SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please post the sequel your story was so cute and really great to read because it's something everyone can relate to the agony of liking someone from afar and never knowing if you'll be brave enough to take a chance to say something or to just try to move on./5 9 2008-04-27 23:10:13
Komikitty I'd like a sequal from Duo's point of view. This was really good and I feel anything continuing it will be just as good if not better! Great Job! =^_^= 9 2008-04-23 10:58:58
Devious Lil Devil that was awesome!!! i absolutely loved it. and such a sweet ending. WuFei is too cute! gasp i didn't even miss the smut(and thats saying something considering how much i like smut!) really sweet story. what i would give to have more 2x5x2 writers like you out there... thanks for sharing. hope this review makes your day just a little bit more brighter. ja!

~Devious
9 2008-04-22 19:26:56
Cristina G. Loved this fic! I've been following it in fanfic.net . Please make a sequel or an epilogue..whatever! Just want to see Duo's point of view...what he thought about Wufei!!! Would be nice to know what Adonis felt for shy Fei Fei! 2008-04-21 20:38:50
Emily Sequel!


Please?

And what I think?... Hm. Would a squee answer that? Because obvious Wufei? Cute beyond words!
Are we going to see more pilots? (Besides Quat...)
9 2008-04-21 15:41:37
S.Maldiva This chapter was cute. Pats Wufei's head Aw, yes you're beautiful - yes you are! 9 2008-04-20 07:31:13
Katya Loved this story... I think a sequel would be nice... Itīs better than a very long epiogue and I really wanna see how the christmas party at the Maxwell's will go for poor shy Wufei...

Keep up the good work
Katya
9 2008-04-20 06:29:20
Kamui-White Le sigh, i loved this! Hmmm...an epilogue would be good to tie everything off and give it a nice finish, but i don't want this to end, so please i'd love it if you wrote a sequel! sequel! sequel! Great story, and i can't wait for more! 9 2008-04-20 00:04:55
Kamui-White I can't believe i missed this chapter when you first posted it, i was just on here and then i thought, o.m.g, there are two chapters on this story that i haven't read, phew but i've read, well chapter 8, so disaster has been averted! This was great, and the straightforwardness of Duo's proposal just had me giggling...now onto the next chapter! 8 2008-04-19 23:54:40
J. Well, I've been reading for a while now, and I love it. I was in stiches when I realized who Wufei's study group was. XDD

Anyway, I love it. It's warm and it's honest. I would like to see a sequel, if Duo really got as talkative as you say. ^___~

And just like someone else pointed out, "flames" aren't critisism. They are people yelling without making any sense, people rationalizing their emotion-based dislike on something, like a character or genre and they should never be confused with constructive critisism. Some young writers call critisism flames because they cannot handle any other kinds of reviews except for OMG YAY SQUEE YOU TEH BEST EVA!!11 But critisism and flames are two totally different things.

Anyway, keep up the good work. I want to see Wufei happy but then, I also wat to see what happens when he meets Duo's family. Do they know Duo is gay? All 38 of them? Anyway, I hope it goes well. Lots of inspiration for the writing!
9 2008-04-19 17:07:56