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| Reviewed by | Review | Chap. | Date |
| Ageha | i forget to say my english is very bad sorry if you not understand my writing. -ageha |
2009-12-30 19:20:50 | |
| Ageha | very sad T-T duo think they are people have sex only but i think wufei and duo love, no? they just not understand ![]() you make good stories. ![]() -ageha |
5 | 2009-12-30 19:19:05 |
| Anonymous | I Really love this story and many of the others you've written! I've been reading them on Fanfic.net but now that i've found your other site i'll be here more often! Thank you!!!! | 5 | 2009-06-28 07:22:41 |
| darkrevenge | is it warm in here? -cough- ~dark |
1 | 2009-05-25 16:53:32 |
| Anonymous | tee hee hee i enjoy everything u write.. yum. wufei is cuuuute as heck. | 3 | 2008-11-10 06:34:37 |
| jade | oh..my..god. do you know how hot that was. lol. and the last part where wufei just went to sleep on duo.. so cuuute. awww. |
2 | 2008-11-10 06:32:06 |
| princess cythera | ![]() I love this one too the idea was brilliant, i like how it started out with the whole challenge thing but is developing into more ![]() keep up the great work |
5 | 2008-11-08 05:07:17 |
| Anonymous | That was frikin awesome! Totally Duwu! | 1 | 2008-10-03 20:54:48 |
| shogi | AHAHA! LOVED how Duo went in expecting to have a chained Dragon and ended up being chained himself!!! WOOT that was HOT!! Very nice work!!! So... Duo doesn't think they're in love and just having fun. Hm. I LOVE that! Can't wait to see what'll happen! I wonder what Wufei is thinking about all this... |
1 | 2008-08-07 07:57:26 |
| J. | First: "I have a feeling that people that's reading my fiction is starting to wonder..." -I have a feeling that people WHO ARE reading my fiction ARE starting to wonder... Just nit-picking a bit. ![]() As I have already complimented you on this fic I will just shyly agree with everyone that you know how to write great lemons. Just when they start sounding like they're going overboard or becoming captives of the most awful fanfic clichés you turn them around and go into a character's head showing that it's really THEIR stupid prejudices that you are describing (instead of your own) or then that they know what they're doing after all, just when I thought they didn't and you were writing a bad fic. XD But I must admit that I find the dialogue chapters pointless and a little disappointing when I was looking forward to a real chapter. I would remove them if I were you. About the plot: what plot you have woven into your pwp series works, in my opinion. Now I'm feeling bad for Duo and I'm also waiting for the plot development, not just another juicy lemon. |
1 | 2008-07-06 19:31:39 |
| Panda | Excellent. I'm glad to see you updating I that admit the dialogue chapters were distracting, and I enjoyed a return to the main storyline. I look forward to getting some insight into Wufei's head next chapter! |
1 | 2008-07-03 13:44:13 |
| Panda | Excellent. I'm glad to see you updating I that admit the dialogue chapters were distracting, and I enjoyed a return to the main storyline. I look forward to getting some insight into Wufei's head next chapter! |
1 | 2008-07-03 13:44:13 |
| Anonymous | lol, yay! good job w/ plot in a lemon piece of writing. and i love the "coke, grapes, cooking oil and cumber" part." fei-y is in for a surpirse! ![]() ![]() ...wonder if fei will see the tapes...... |
1 | 2008-07-03 11:40:16 |
| sylenctone | This is such fun! Oh you're really making me love this pairing! The dialog chapters are delightful too. Thank you very much for writing!jess |
4 | 2008-05-09 09:08:14 |
| J. | I thought the lemon was great! I'm becoming a fangirl for you... lol!! I wonder what happened to Quatre, though. He never got lucky, noticed that his two straight friends were far luckier than him and went home depressed, only to find Trowa ready to confess his love for him..? lol Anyway, the images of Wufei were sexay. |
3 | 2008-04-26 10:51:19 |
| LithiaStar | ![]() This is a great! I love this pairing and you did a wonderful job with them. This chapter in particular made me laugh out loud...the fact I was in lecture while reading it was the only bad part. ![]() I look forward to reading more from you. |
4 | 2008-01-21 16:22:21 |
| Ah Hael | Give it CPR? keels over laughing I absolutely love that line! |
4 | 2008-01-20 19:23:39 |
| Kamui-White | not as effective as the last dialogue, i have to say...looking forward to the real chap...keep writing^_^ | 4 | 2008-01-20 05:58:22 |
| Devious Lil Devil | ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!! that last line was the best! god, 2x5 is the best. that totally made my day. ".....Did you fall down?...Oh... mmm... I like blowjobs.” frickin' hilarious. ^__^ |
3 | 2008-01-19 08:41:00 |
| Kamui-White | hehe...good dialogue...it worked really well, i love your humour...hehe wufei's left buttock is now the express 'property of Duo Maxwell' lol^_^ | 2008-01-18 14:07:28 |